There are
countless talents that an author needs in order to be successful. Just to name a few, there is:
creativity, a comfort with language, an ability to form single sentence hooks
and a knack for developing unique, believable characters.
However, there
is one talent that is often overlooked: the ability to keep the story
fluid.
I never
considered this a skill until a fellow writer complemented my ability to move
around various characters and scenes in order to implement feedback. Once I
started to think about it, I realized that I seldom hear this skill discussed
and have never seen it taught in classes or workshops.
Regardless,
keeping a story fluid in your mind is vital to revisions. When you give your writing to test
readers they will (if you’re lucky) give you clear, honest feedback. Some of the feedback will require you
to change plot elements or characters in ways that will send ripples throughout
the world you created.
Something that
is often said (but few of us ever believe) is that until your writing is
actually published, just about anything in your world can be altered. Characters can switch genders. Your story can move from modern day
to the 1970’s. You can go from a
third person to first person narrator.
Being an author
means living in a paradox in which you create a world that feels real but
everything is open to a total overhaul.
Here are some
suggestions as to how we keep a story fluid in our minds:
1) Just accepting that the story can change. At some point after college I came to
realize that when I showed people my writing there was a very good chance they
would give suggestions that would require me to take out entire characters or
chapters. Once I started going to
workshops with this attitude it became much easier to implement massive changes.
2) Outlines can help as long as you don’t
overuse them. Outline the story
you currently have in lower case and note changes throughout in all caps so you
can see where they are being implemented. This will make it easier to track the
changes and how they affect the rest of the tale.
3) Look for places in your story that you
already know are weak. These are
places where you can bring in characters/scenes/story elements that your
readers believe need to be added.
4) An oldie but a goodie: Take a week or two
to work on other projects. When
you come back you might not be so close to your world and become more open to
major alterations.
5) View your plot elements and characters as
puzzle pieces. This may sound cold
hearted but this will make it easier to move various aspects of the story
around. Instead of being
overwhelmed by the number of changes you need to make you can just say, “Well I
can move the scene in the cabin to before they go to the hardware store and
then we can skip this unnecessary scene.”
6) Never forget, you are lord and master
over this world (let’s face it, most novelists have God complexes). If something needs to be changed, you
can make those changes.
And never
forget, you are a writer because you love writing so realizing that you are
going to need to re-write major portions of your story only means that you get
to do even more of what you love.
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