My cousin Karen suggested this first line to me. I wrote for 5 minutes and this is what I got.
Michael checked his
list of supplies again. So far ten people had taken the bait.
He was going for thirteen, a baker’s dozen, but it was late
in the day. There was only time to
catch one more. Michael laid the
bait out again and crawled behind the ornamental bushes in the mall’s food
court.
For over half an hour, Michael watched mothers push their
strollers, teenagers flirt and old couples bicker in line for Arby’s. Finally, a tall, dark man
with a young face walked out of the movie theater. He stopped and stared at the mug of coffee Michael had
placed by the bushes.
Michael held his breath. For a second the man didn’t seem able to decide if he was
interested in the coffee. He
finally crouched and snatched it up.
“What the hell?”
He realized something was wrong and tried to drop the mug. The glue stuck to his hands. The line attached to the mug went
taught and Michael reeled the man into the bushes.
Two hours later the man woke up in Michael’s basement. All around him men and women who had
also fallen prey to the hunter’s bait were also stirring.
“Good morning,” Michael smiled stepping out of the
shadows. “I am glad to see you are
all awake. There is much to
do.” He pointed at each of his
prisoners. “You’re Special Agent
Cooper….you’re Bob…you’re Laura Palmer.
The rest of you are various towns people. Learn your
lines quickly. We begin at
dawn. No one will stop me this
time.”
He threw a bundle of scripts onto the floor. On each cover was written, “Twin
Peaks: Season 3.”
Bahaha. I wondered how that show got cast... Well done
ReplyDeleteYeah, wait until you hear how they cast LOST!
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